You are a cake,
beautiful and sweet.
As a young children,
the cake is fantastic.
which I have at night.
As a young girl,
it makes me smile.
But when I grow up,
I am puzzled
Someone hates the cake.
It is too sweet.
Someone hates the dream.
It is too happy.
The cake is put into shelf.
The dream become a nightmare.
Someday, the dream never turn up.
Someday, I become a lonely person,
who is always cry near the grave.




I enjoyed reading your poem. I thought the use of metaphor was good.
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