After reading this poem, I couldn't help but to think to myself why I couldn't think of comparing love to things like this. I really liked your poem! (:
This poem is really cute~ I really enjoyed the part where you compare love to chopsticks because without the other half, love isn't complete. -Suzanne L
I love that you organized your poem as hearts. That's really unique. And you said love is chopsticks, which is related to our life. It's very vivid. I love your poem.
Yeah it's like an essay. I like how you wrote the last stanza. The body paragraph isn't always as exciting, but the intro and conclusion are the interesting part. But not sure if it's always gonna be "happy" Well written, Mike.
I like how your poem corresponds with the photos you put on. And also so different from each one of them. Good job :)
ReplyDeleteI love your heart shaped poem and also your creative comparisons. The personification you used was really effective. It's such a sweet poem.
ReplyDeleteAfter reading this poem, I couldn't help but to think to myself why I couldn't think of comparing love to things like this. I really liked your poem! (:
ReplyDeleteThis poem is really cute~ I really enjoyed the part where you compare love to chopsticks because without the other half, love isn't complete.
ReplyDelete-Suzanne L
Very good. The pictures were very cute. I like your poem overall.
ReplyDeleteI love that you organized your poem as hearts. That's really unique. And you said love is chopsticks, which is related to our life. It's very vivid. I love your poem.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your poem! I like how you formed your poem into hearts. Good job!
ReplyDelete- Amy
I love your poem,especially the essay part! A very funny comparison :P Also the heart shape is very romantic and creative. Well done!
ReplyDeleteYeah it's like an essay. I like how you wrote the last stanza. The body paragraph isn't always as exciting, but the intro and conclusion are the interesting part. But not sure if it's always gonna be "happy"
ReplyDeleteWell written, Mike.
ps. I like the chopstick pic^^
The hearts were an elegant touch to bring out what you really felt what love is. Nice comparisons that are very vivid and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteHi Mike! I really liked the way you wrote your poem! It was really creative. I also really liked the pictures. Good job!
ReplyDelete-Selina Liu